I think my essay does need more work and I think I need to find a few more quotes to support some of the points I have made. I think that the structure of it so far is strong since I changed it from my original plan, it reads more like an ongoing argument now rather than just all the points 'for' followed by all the points 'against'. It might also be helpful to find some other images to reference. I have found it hard to find images which link directly to the arguments of my essay but I have since thought about using photographs, maybe from advertising campaigns to give example of cultural appropriation and identity.
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